新东方汪忠平点评新四级作文3

时间:2008-10-14 02:07:00   来源:无忧考网     [字体: ]
For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a campaign speech in support of your election to the post of chairman of the student union. You should write at least 120 words following outline given below in Chinese:

1. 你认为自己具备了什么条件(能力、性格、爱好等)可以胜任学生会主席的工作。

2. 如果当选,你将为本校同学做些什么。

这样的内容其实对大家的要求并不高,只要将自己介绍给大家并谈谈对今后工作的打算就可以了。但从考试后同学的反馈来看,有些基础较差的同学完成得并不理想。即使是作为“范文”挂在网上的下面这篇文章(应该是某位考生考试结束以后自我感觉良好放到网上的)其实也仍然存在一些问题:

(1)Today I am very glad to run for the president of the students‘ union. (2)I am junior in Chemical Department. (3)Since I came into the university, I have always been the monitor of my class. (4)I have done a very good job for my classmates, and my classmates and my teacher all give me a good praise. (5)I am good at communication and organizing. (6)And I like to help others. (7)Moreover, I have a variety of hobbies, for example, basketball, football, pingpong, etc. (8)I am sure that I am qualified for this position. (9)If I become the president, I will try my best to do well. (10)I will organize some suitable activities for you. (11)I will do many things for you to reach your demands as well. (12)I am sincerely hope you will give me a chance, and please believe me that I will be a good president. (13)Thank you.